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Old 07-25-2006, 02:37 PM   #1
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Im going to keep all of my own songs here in this thread. I simply ask that others please keep their songs out of this thread. I would love comments and corrections [if needed]. Thank you and GOD bless.

This is somewhat of a bridge and chorus that I'm working on.

I cannot see
Whats happening
To us

And should I hate
Or should I cry
Tonight

Where you left me
You killed a mocking bird
Where you left me
I'm still standing... here

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Old 08-13-2006, 08:11 PM   #2
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Im going to keep all of my own songs here in this thread. I simply ask that others please keep their songs out of this thread. I would love comments and corrections [if needed]. Thank you and GOD bless.

This is somewhat of a bridge and chorus that I'm working on.

I cannot see
Whats happening
To us

And should I hate
Or should I cry
Tonight

Where you left me
You killed a mocking bird
Where you left me
I'm still standing... here


I'm gonna be honest....it wasn't bad...but I can't tell how good it was without what type of music it is....though I do love the title....the title rocks....and here's a little tip...if you put your lyrics italisized they look better....I do it and it makes it look more connected...
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I'm gonna be honest....it wasn't bad...but I can't tell how good it was without what type of music it is....though I do love the title....the title rocks....and here's a little tip...if you put your lyrics italisized they look better....I do it and it makes it look more connected...
allright

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Old 08-22-2006, 07:33 PM   #4
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allright

thanks
what style of music is it supposed to be?...
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Old 08-22-2006, 10:15 PM   #5
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this particular song,
melodic simple smooth

Em C G D
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Old 08-23-2006, 06:57 AM   #6
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this particular song,
melodic simple smooth

Em C G D
ok gotcha...I think it would work....
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I cannot see
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To us

..........

Where you left me
I'm still standing... here
these are my fav lines out of the song...and definitely flow well with the title....but yeah I can see this being a pretty nice song....
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Old 08-25-2006, 04:22 PM   #7
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ooo nice i think its cool
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