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Old 05-10-2001, 02:57 PM   #1
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Here's my first song.... wondering what you guys thought

here's my first song that i have completely written by myself... i've been playing the guitar now for about 8 months for the sole purpose of putting my own music to my words.... well here it is

its about having to relate to my sister some tough family news

and it looks like i'm a fossil around here at age 19


What She Doesn't Know

verse 1

i talked her out of bed last night even though tomorrow called for rest

leaving just to talk that night midnight conversations always seem the best

verse 2

dancing round words and phrases all i'm saying's adding up to negative

turning truth uncovering the fact you only offer us one life to give


Chorus

And I know that what she doesn't know
Won't make anything less real
If I could see past me
Then maybe I would know what she must feel


verse 3

hard words turn us back around past the school and on towards our fears

dome light brings us out of darkness showing to the other one our tears

bridge

Show me to guide
Guide me to show
All that I have
And all that I know

verse 4

sitting down mind runnin' round eyes looking over pictures of my living room
eventhough i had to tell her never meant to wake that girl up so soon

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