[Demon_Hunter]

Dude, I like that. Alot.

Its coherent, and from just reading it (not getting to hear it outloud) it doesnt seem to hang up on itself, or feel forced.

[Ax]

Dragon Fly:

Here I am, exposed to your toxins and my hands tied,
and and eyes shut, hiding from your grin
Helpless, with your diabolic weapon gleaming
so unwieldy yet so deadly

Still here, waiting for the sting
waiting for you to pick me clean
Inhale, i feel your breathe on my back
and then you pluck my wings...

Dragonfly
I look so much scarier than I am, terrifying
Dragonfly
Pluck my wings so I can die, helpless on my belly please

Take it all away and leave the pain
take it all away and leave the pain
take it all away profane

Here I am, tasting your presence
I am, soaking it all in
Here we are, in pestilent symbiosis
our perfect harmony of discourse and reason

Overzealous, I am a slave to your
wicked smile, I'm begging you to hurt me again
like a dragonfly, pluck my wings and leave me to die
scavengers delight

Dragonfly
I look so much scarier and I am, terrified
Dragonfly
Pluck my sings so I can die
helpless on my belly please

take it all away and leave the pain
take it all away and leave the pain
take it all away and touch my brain
take the profane away...

[Ax]

Truthless

I can taste fuzz on my teeth
words spill over them like month old rotting canine meat
my words a sweetly twisted like pestilence and ice cream cones
and for a dollar you can take them all home

And I am less than what you see
There's nothing quite like me

Soak me up,
you can't differentiate
when I'm tall and when I'm earnest, postulate
to tell the truth, sometimes neither can I
and false tears, hide the malice in my eyes

and I am less than what you see
There's nothing quite like me.

[Ax]

Empires

We spent so long building an empire
just to watch it burn
and all along we knew how this would end
but but still we toiled on
with hopeful dreams
of matches and kerosene
and now we set it all ablaze

Purged by fired
edified. All our hopes and dreams
disappear, we are only here


A forgery, a sacrilegious bond
formed by hate it is
always push and pull
and we are, void of all desire
let it all burn

Purged by fired
edified. All our hopes and dreams
disappear, we are only here

[Ax]

This song is about coping with change, they aren't particularly mind blowing... but I wrote them and I don't care if they suck... this is also a rough draft.

There's nothing new under the sun
there's nothing to do that hasn't been done
and there's no time for regret
but time marches on and on, on that you can bet

but we are spiraling out of control
into a starry sea
and if we ever stop to lament
there'll be no future for you or me

when the wolves eat the sun
and the final battle's begun
be sure to find a good seat to watch
for the heroes of old have returned

the trumpet will sound
and the son will return
and Earth made anew
and we'll all get a fresh start
and the sky remain forever blue

but for now we can all sit tight
spiraling out of control
and there's nothing we can do to stop
the new or the old