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Unread 05-08-2006, 04:45 PM   #1
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electrikkz songs- everything in one :) (RC)

Since I'm posting, stuff in here and I know there is gonna be able more on the way, I just decided to put everything im one post since I wont be spamming it. You can RC if you like, though I would really like feedback. All of the songs posted here are not finished and still on the cutting board till i get them exactly how I want them. Hopefully soon I'll have the melodies and such, and get some recordings on here. Who knows? I might be good.

New!!!
This one is called Angel's Voice Resonate. I think the title is good for it, and it fits with the song. I think I thought of this first and made it the prechorus, and structured everything around it. Hope you like it.

Verse 1:
And everythingís so black and white.
Turn this daylight into night.
Bring me from this frightful sleep.
Wake me up and give me peace.
Take me to your sanctuary.
Give me wings of elegance
Change my heart of madness

Pre chorus:
Angels voices resonateÖ..

Chorus:
Let them sing Gods praise.
Perceive the sound of glory
Angels tell of His unfailing grace.

Verse 2:

Your leniency is beyond me
How you can love and care for me
For all that I have done injustice too
You still love me through and through.
I worship at your throne
Wash your feet with tears
Iím obsessed with your love.

Pre chorus:

Angels voices resonateÖ..

Chorus:
Let them sing Gods praise.
Perceive the sound of glory
Angels tell of His unfailing grace.

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Suspend Time (Photographs)

Here is the one i just posted awhile ago.

Suspended Time (Photographs) Job 26


Verse 1:
Seeing old memories, like bent photographs
Remembering days like these, spent watching you laugh.
Together our eyes met with heaven, as I sing your praise
Together we walk through the darkest of days.
You spread your love over skyís open space
Out on the horizon I can see your face.

Pre-chorus 1:

Suspended time is yours and mine
To remember retain and keep I mind.
For all we have done and all that have not
You were always there close to my heart

Chorus:
All of those secrets that were once mine
Even when I thought you didnít have the time.
I told you my story, my legend, my end.
I let you see all my secrets within.

Verse 2:
Snapshots of the time when your breath graced this place.
Grainy films, of times spend playing in the rain, it splashing on my face.
Reminiscing on those extraordinary games of pretend.
All of this I have seemed to maintain.
Then I wake up your standing beside me holding my hand.
Standing in a room with, no floors, no walls.

Pre-chorus 2:

Suspended time is yours and mine
To remember retain and keep in mind.
For all those recollections of story book memories.
I seem to see you through me.

Chorus:
All of those secrets that were once mine
Even when I thought you didnít have the time.
I told you my story, my legend, my end.
I let you see all my secrets within.

Verse 3:
Set positions in this make shift room; make it seem bigger than existence
Standing by this small screen, watching my life pass me by
You let my hand go and let me inside
Your life as it was, as it used to be then
To show me my faults my mistakes within.
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I Bled

Just posting everything


In the ninth hour I felt your cry through my soul. (and I)
I felt the blood run down your holy remains.
I saw you crucified for all those sold.
I saw the heartache written on your limbs.
I felt the earth shake, as our eyes met with heaven.
I heard the wails of mourning, the delight of remembrance.

(Pre-Chorus)


Those memories, your legacy, you breathe your last for me.

(Chorus)
All that pain and anguish.
Part of me didnít wish for this.
To feel your sting of sadness.
To touch your tears of misery.
To know you died for more than me.

Seeing aged memories like bent photographs.
I recall the words you spoke, let me renew

You brought me out of this vacant hole.
Shattering pieces of my heart, to make anew
Shed tears over my desiccated soul, to make me into you.


Those memories, your legacy, you breathe your last for me.

(Chorus)
All that pain and anguish.
Part of me didnít wish for this.
To feel your sting of sadness.
To touch your tears of misery.
To know you died for more than me.
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Cast Away

Something I wrote when I was....12\13? Entered this in a NAC rally


Feel like I'm walkin' alone in this cold, cold world
wondering, who I coulda been
if i didnt follow this narrow road.
Souls dying, crying out to the Son
calling for redemption on this emtpy street.
Watching your life pass you by, depression not to far away
deep down that wet well your comsumed in your own darkness.
But I wonder is that why he marked us.

Feel so alone,
Feel so helpless,
Feel so cold,
Feel your hand touch mine, its a symbol of freedom
Casting away my empty soul, you fill me.

You cant, you wont, break me down
not now, not ever, push me down (repeat 2x)

Sunshine in the dark days,
shadows cast away,
your grey hearts now alive.
Oh, its all part of this life,
persecuted for what you believe.
Martyred, your punishment.
Stand tall its all for what you are.
Cant lose my faith in the mist of this
Cant lose my self in the mist of this.

Feel so alone,
Feel so helpless,
Feel so cold,
Feel your hand touch mine, its a symbol of freedom
Casting away my empty soul, you fill me.

I need you, to understand how I feel,
he's my only hope, not becoming what I was before
doubting myself, doubting my faith, doubting my heart
your making me crazy with anticipation.
What are we all going to do?
Follow the crowd? Follow the one who saved you?
Dont deny the way you feel inside, guilty for the things
youve done, dont push me down, dont break me down.

You cant, you wont, break me down
not now, not ever, push me down (repeat 2x)

Feel so alone
Feel so alone,
Feel so helpless,
Feel so cold,
Your hand touch mine, its a symbol of freedom
Casting away my empty soul, you fill me. (you fill me)
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Scarlet Letters

Something else I wrote at 12/13 ")

Scarlet Letter

Free my mind of this sucidic state
Free me of this depressing fate
Let me go, feel their grasp lighten
The thing dragging me down was them, and I had no clue.
Bring me comfort in the mist of pain,
I didn't know I was hurting me.

Come to me when I need you now
Please come when I call you now

Free my heart of its bleeding state
Free my wrists of nails that met.
Let me go of this, share my fate
Free my head of this crown of thorns
Carry my cross
Seal my kiss with a scarlet letter.
Writtings on the envelope,
what do incryped codes reveal.

Come to me when I need you now
Please come when I call you now.

Free me soul from this lonley tomb
Free my body of the torture I caused
Bring me back
Seal my fate with a scarlet letter.
Writtings on the envelopes,
what do incryped codes reveal.
Seal my fate with a scarlet letter,
Seal it with his blood
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Undone

I love this song, I got a Bronze in NAC for it , I wrote this 2 months ago.

Undone

Desperate tears fall to the ground now,
no comfort from our oppressors
Already dead, happier than living,
no one to take there place
Better than both, better than none.
This too is meaningless, since when is it all gone?
Fold your hands, close your eyes, make no sound now

Burnt by these chains
unlock my shames
mark me namless
why's it always have to be like this?
take my heart, my soul, my mind
make me undone in your eyes

Dont let me fade
show your life, your love, your way
this pain consumed my eyes
but your always telling me
were not meant to die
so lets figure questions why
in this current situation
always making hesitations
for this constant complancency
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