[JACk120]

I have a feeling I might regret this, but since I sang this little country ditty I wrote to the folks in my church ensemble last night (as a joke, to not much feedback), I might as well put it out there and see what you guys think.

Focus
A song for God's glory

Cryin' in my mocha decaf
'Cause microbrews are so passe
I will turn from the trend of the moment
to live for the God of today
true love of God may not be in fashion
but I know it's the better way
then cryin' in my mocha decaf
'cause microbrews are so passe


That's it. I'll post some other stuff another time, but let's start here.
Thanks for your input in advance
JACk120

[relient nelson]

It's short

[Skeeter]

Ha! It's cute. It is short, though, and could probably use another verse or too. Maybe a refrain or chorus?

[JACk120]

Thanks fellas , I'll work on the length. I was thinking along the lines of Janis Joplins' "O Lord won't you buy me". Cute, with a country flavor, not neccesarily acapella (as "O Lord" was), but strongly declaring the faith.

Thanks again
JACk120