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Unread 03-08-2006, 01:35 PM   #1
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Post Some of My Inspirations

I will post here, some of my work. Please come, and comment, so that I might be a better poet.

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Unread 03-08-2006, 01:36 PM   #2
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"In The Waking"
By: Jordan Randall Smith

>I rous'ed my head, to find in it's stead, the thought of the pevious night.
>The shadows in my room, combined with the gloom, battled the ever growing light.
>The sheets, they lie, untouched-except on previous encounters
>From nights filled with rest, I am happy and blest, to know God is my Protector.

>The day has begun, with no further adieu, the silence gives way to the singing;
>I must, away, towards the dawn of the day, that holds me in thrall of the springing.
>I took up my garments, in an orderly fashion, to find my dreams take flight...
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Unread 03-08-2006, 01:39 PM   #3
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"Thought of You"
by: Jordan Smith

Can you feel the clouds?
Can you taste the rain?
Do you think of me;
Like I, you - everyday?

Do you see me smile,
When I look in your eyes?
Do you hear the tears,
When you see my cries?

Oh, I
I thought of you today.
Oh, just
to look upon your face.

Can you feel the wind,
Blowing through the trees?
Can you see me falling,
Down on my knees?

I'm prayin' for the day
When we two become one.
Where two hearts
Beat as one

Oh, I
I thought of you today.
I dreamt of the way,
The smile grows on your face.

Do you think of me?
Like I, you - everyday?
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Unread 03-08-2006, 01:44 PM   #4
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hello
today is a day...
like any other day
there is only a few weeks
until graduation in may

i'll have my diploma
my name on a page
handed to me
on stage

my life will contiue
as college begins
i'll be sad for memories gone, of friends
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Unread 03-08-2006, 01:46 PM   #5
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my days drag on
like they always do
filled with desicions to make
before i'm through

if ya'll like to see me
if that is the case
then head on down
to my own MYSPACE!
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Unread 03-11-2006, 10:30 PM   #6
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Haha, you're very good. Sometimes funny, sometimes thought provoking... I like that.

Keep it up!
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Unread 03-20-2006, 01:56 PM   #7
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my thanks to you
dear gracious m'lady
i'll gain some more insight
to write more when i'm ready.
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Unread 04-01-2006, 11:20 AM   #8
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wow jordan ur a very good poet
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Unread 04-01-2006, 10:21 PM   #9
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my thanks to you
dear gracious m'lady
i'll gain some more insight
to write more when i'm ready.
That's awesome!
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That's awesome!
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wow jordan ur a very good poet
Why... Thank you
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Unread 05-05-2006, 01:06 PM   #11
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I'm going to record this one this next week!

I will give my heart
to you jesus
i will give my soul
to you jesus
i will give my mind
to you jesus
I will give it all to you

I will give it all
to you
i will give it all
to you
i will give it jesus

i will give my strength
to you jesus
i will give my hands
to you jesus
i will give my life
to you jesus
i will give it all to you
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