[K-Max]

Hey,

Well, I'm fairly pleased with this song, so I'll post it for ya! I haven't quite got the chords worked out. It's more of an Emo song as it doesn't have any real repeating lines. It just goes straight through!

It's 3:52
On a Sunday afternoon
The trees sway
And the birds, They still fly away
The breeze hits my face
And again, this day feels the same
I walk through my neighborhood
Oh God this feeling pertrudes

Walking past all these people
With an attitude on my shoulders
Unknowing of this feeling
That has become my whole being
Walk and talk despise
As my words hold no disguise
To the lies that I hide
About what is truly inside

God, I repent
This sin is capturing Your light
I need to walk away
As I fall to my knees and pray

You are holy,
You're the Lord who's mighty
You are holy,
You're the Lamb

Enjoy,
K-Max

P.S. I know it has a lot of rhyming, but hopefully that doesn't detract!

[Kalamos]

wow that is great!

[Mr Niceguy]

Yeah, great stuff! Keep writing.