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Old 08-22-2005, 03:16 PM   #1
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Mikel's senseless monotony
I posted this in my blog, then I found this CGR section...

This is just something I jotted down the other night, it's open to criticism...

The moon descends as the sun's eclipse
the light fades quick as the dark overtakes
the irony of it all is that you're not awake
the dream of a man rich in deceit
the ashes fall at his defeat
this life began at one's end
while death slowly creeped in
though the battle was won the war was lost
the game was fair but the fun was false
what was gained is what it cost
the end so near, yet so much fear
to start again and lose face
or continue on and lose the race
with so much to say, in so few words
though it seems that fate has turned...


I don't feel that it's complete... but I can't seem to find the words to complete the thoughts... reading over it, some of the lines could have been switched around... but it's meant to keep jumping and make you think... I've always written things to paint pictures in my head... this one seems to have an image... but after the first few lines, the first image sticks in my head... oh well, let me know what you guys think...

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Old 08-29-2005, 09:12 AM   #2
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I will use this section to post any and all future quotes, poems, ideas, and what-not that may be of any interest... but at this moment things are to grim and dark to come up with anything
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"To trust a liar is to deny yourself the truth." -Me
"The thing I treasure Most in Life, cannot be taken away" -Disturbed
...Don't ask the questions if you fear the answers... -Shinedown
... Have you ever felt lost inside, so unloved within that you almost died... -Shinedown
...hold onto your dreams, because your nightmares might seem like their your reality... -Papa Roach
... I can't live in the past and drown myself in memories... -Breaking Benjamin
...Some of the ugliest things take the longest time to make... and some of the easiest habits are the hardest to break -Breaking Benjamin
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Old 08-30-2005, 12:35 PM   #3
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Love has blinded me to all reason...

Even though your words are meant to hurt me and crush my soul
I take great pride in the fact that you acknowledge my existence
Even though the dagger you hold high above your head is meant to tear me limb from limb
I view it as a trophy because you had a hand in my life
Even though you post my skull on a spear at your throne
I view it as a love offering, for you are near me
Even though you toss my remains in your compost heap
I see it as a tribute, because you buried me on your land
Even though you smite me in your memories
I see it as love because you thought of me
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"To trust a liar is to deny yourself the truth." -Me
"The thing I treasure Most in Life, cannot be taken away" -Disturbed
...Don't ask the questions if you fear the answers... -Shinedown
... Have you ever felt lost inside, so unloved within that you almost died... -Shinedown
...hold onto your dreams, because your nightmares might seem like their your reality... -Papa Roach
... I can't live in the past and drown myself in memories... -Breaking Benjamin
...Some of the ugliest things take the longest time to make... and some of the easiest habits are the hardest to break -Breaking Benjamin
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Old 08-30-2005, 03:25 PM   #4
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To live without you leaves me empty,
but to try and catch you kills me.
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"To trust a liar is to deny yourself the truth." -Me
"The thing I treasure Most in Life, cannot be taken away" -Disturbed
...Don't ask the questions if you fear the answers... -Shinedown
... Have you ever felt lost inside, so unloved within that you almost died... -Shinedown
...hold onto your dreams, because your nightmares might seem like their your reality... -Papa Roach
... I can't live in the past and drown myself in memories... -Breaking Benjamin
...Some of the ugliest things take the longest time to make... and some of the easiest habits are the hardest to break -Breaking Benjamin
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