CPF Song Writing.

**Becky** · 08-09-2005, 07:31 PM

can you write a song about my moving to florida?

walkwjc · 08-09-2005, 08:26 PM

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Originally Posted by Becky

can you write a song about my moving to florida?

Yes I can. You're on the list.

Jc · 08-22-2005, 07:31 PM

Donnie!!! My Song is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!

stephentoddpope · 08-22-2005, 08:36 PM

holy crap! those songs are great!...what about ...monkeys and grapefruit!

walkwjc · 09-03-2005, 04:03 AM

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Originally Posted by Sunkist

walkwjc forgot about me... *sniffles* I still want a song.

Ok, so I threw in a little lead guitar and some stuff on this one. There are a few mistakes, but this is my first attempt at spontaneously picking in a song. Plus I am working off of my Alvarez and computer mic. My Seagull is at church along with my amp and mic.

So this is a bit coarse, but what the heck. Here goes.

Sunkist

You anonymously intrigue
You’re namelessly a mystery
Your alias is so smooth
Such an elegant nom de plume

Incognito you are free
You’ve given none your identity
By Sunkist we know you best
About your name we know even less.

Sunkist sounds like butterflies wings
Slashing through the gentle breeze
Like the first drop of sunrise splashing down on me

Like the general warmth of the summer’s day
Like the first time you hear the weatherman say
Spring is all but here

You’re nicknames are all so cute
Baroness, Bubba, they all rule
Your true handle remains obscure
It’s quite ambiguous for sure

Your name makes me thirsty for a drink
Sometimes I even stop and think,
Was I even thirsty before this thread
Or was it you just getting in my head

Be sure and check the first post for an updated list and links to all the songs in this thread!

Jc · 09-03-2005, 08:00 AM

I dont usually make suggestions about songs people have written; but if you added a bridge or something to Sunkist, it would be a very nice nearly full length song

adamkaboom · 09-03-2005, 08:16 AM

That is soooo sweet!!!! Great job!!!!

walkwjc · 09-03-2005, 08:38 AM

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Originally Posted by Jc

I dont usually make suggestions about songs people have written; but if you added a bridge or something to Sunkist, it would be a very nice nearly full length song

Thanks Jc. That's a good idea. Suggestions are always welcome and that is one of the reasons I started this thread is to hone my song writting, and open up my creativity a little.

Quote:

Adamkaboom said:
That is soooo sweet!!!! Great job!!!!

Thanks

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**mtlmouth** · 09-03-2005, 10:49 AM

Hey, Donnie.
Can you write a song about the *actions* thread?

walkwjc · 09-03-2005, 11:09 AM

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Originally Posted by mtlmouth

Hey, Donnie.
Can you write a song about the *actions* thread?

I tried already. It's hard to record though.

Sunkist · 09-04-2005, 08:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by walkwjc

Ok, so I threw in a little lead guitar and some stuff on this one. There are a few mistakes, but this is my first attempt at spontaneously picking in a song. Plus I am working off of my Alvarez and computer mic. My Seagull is at church along with my amp and mic.

So this is a bit coarse, but what the heck. Here goes.

Sunkist

You anonymously intrigue
You’re namelessly a mystery
Your alias is so smooth
Such an elegant nom de plume

Incognito you are free
You’ve given none your identity
By Sunkist we know you best
About your name we know even less.

Sunkist sounds like butterflies wings
Slashing through the gentle breeze
Like the first drop of sunrise splashing down on me

Like the general warmth of the summer’s day
Like the first time you hear the weatherman say
Spring is all but here

You’re nicknames are all so cute
Baroness, Bubba, they all rule
Your true handle remains obscure
It’s quite ambiguous for sure

Your name makes me thirsty for a drink
Sometimes I even stop and think,
Was I even thirsty before this thread
Or was it you just getting in my head

Be sure and check the first post for an updated list and links to all the songs in this thread!

I can't listen to it right now, but I am quite pleased.