[Xakep_INC]

The song's supposed to be a pretty simple one (Musically it is only a 4 chord progression all over the place), yet "loud and fun".

Someone
Verse 1:
Someone told me that to be something I need
to die, to leave all that I have behind
Someone told me that He loves me and He cares for me
even if I look to the other side

Bridge (Pre chorus):
Don't wanna be someone who just lives and dies
I wanna have eternal life
and live forever with you

Chorus:
I'm not even the best of the worst
yet he chose me to be his child
I've been less than faithful at most
but he's still there for me

[Small]

Too rushed to do a line-by-line, but off-hand, it seems pretty good. It's simple, and that's definitely in its favor.

Don't wanna be someone who just lives and dies

I like this line.
It's maybe cliched, but you can't really approach this topic without ending up cliche, so I suppose that was a given...
Pretty good work man, keep it up.