[Josh]

Just wrote this, with a simple folkish guitar tune. I don't know if it's worth finishing.

every single new day burned out feeling just like the rest
and i couldn't help but feel like i was the only one depressed
my outlook's very simple, my dear, but you've made it so complex
you see i just don't recall the way i got into this mess.

Josh.

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Originally Posted by Josh

Just wrote this, with a simple folkish guitar tune. I don't know if it's worth finishing.

every single new day burned out feeling just like the rest
and i couldn't help but feel like i was the only one depressed
my outlook's very simple, my dear, but you've made it so complex
you see i just don't recall the way i got into this mess.

Josh.

I like where you can take this... my only suggestion would be to consider taking out or changing the word "new". Seems a little unnecessary I think. Just my .02. Would appreciate your feedback on my song if you have the time... Click here

[swtMaebird]

Every sentence deserves a chance!! I say finish it... gots promise!