[farmgirl16]

This may be really bad but I need to get out what I feel. So if you like it tell me if not then whatever!!


I wish I could explain
why I feel the way I do
Why I'm not able to concentrate
on anything but you

I had everything worked out
I was over you
I had so many feelings
and yet you never knew

I hear you talk about her
and I don't know what to do
I have all these feelings inside
but I don't know how to tell you

I'm not as perfect as she is
Everyone knows that is true
but I try to be the best I can
and I would give everything up for you.

We may never be more than friends
and I don't much like that part
but it doesnt matter what happens next
you will always have my heart

I've never had the courage
to tell you whats in my heart
I'll love you forever, like you for always
even if we are to part.

[ResonatorSphinx]

I like it very much. this may be too much of a personal observation but i'm going to guess this from your real locked away feelings right? whether or not it is, you definately have talent. continue your work and continue posting. i'll look forward to your next one, God bless ^_^.

[farmgirl16]

One plane destroys a tower
One soldier in battle falls
One man loved his son
One son died for us all.

One girl cries to sleep at night cause
One mother took her own life
One father can't look at his kids because
One look reminds him of his wife

One believer preaches the gospel
One more died for his beliefs
One man died on a cross cause
One thought he was a thief

One Bible opens everyday
One child decides to kneel and pray
One Father looks down from above
and gives his children everlasting love.

[ResonatorSphinx]

...wow farmgirl! God has truely, beyond any doubt blessed your heart to speak for itself! Have you ever tried getting published? I don't think you'd have any problems at all. God bless.

[farmgirl16]

So you think you are the best
that you're better than the rest
that no one else will ever
be as good as you.

So you think that it's okay
to judge people everday
well how would you feel inside
if your future those people were to decide.

So you think you know everything
You know what everyday will bring
surprises will never happen to you
and you'll be ready when they do.

So you think that you know me
but you only know what you see
you may think that I am shy
but that's not really what's inside.

[WorshipJesus]

Wow, farmgirl. you are truly blessed. have you tried to put music to any of this? even a sweet beat would work. keep up with this. God has truly blessed you with writing poetry. God Bless. -WJ

[swtMaebird]

I love all these!! I relate esp. to "You Think"
Keep posting!!!

[Ordinary Sarah]

Good job! Keep writing, please

[farmgirl16]

Heres a start of one! Need help to finish!

He is the holy one
we all praise his name
He's the wise one
he knows everything
he's the only one
worthy of praise
and i will fall down on my knees
to worship him
The Lord and King

[farmgirl16]

This is more of a song

Darkness settles in
Like the sun going down.
Hope is washed away and
replaced with doubt
Looking for answers
in all the wrong places
Hoping to find something
to fill in the spaces.

Life goes on even when
you don't want it to
Things go wrong and sometimes
there's nothing you can do.
Just gotta have faith
in the Lord most high
Just close your eyes right now
and give him your life.


Sitting in a chair
right next to her best friend
she now understands
that she can no longer pretend
The love he gives is just to strong
and she doesn't know if she belongs

Life goes on even when
you don't want it to
Things go wrong and sometimes
there's nothing you can do.
Just gotta have faith
in the Lord most high
Just close your eyes right now
and give him your life.

Looking around
she's all alone
Surrounded by people
but they don't know
who she is
or what she'll ever be
How can she make them see.


Life goes on even when
you don't want it to
Things go wrong and sometimes
there's nothing you can do.
Just gotta have faith
in the Lord most high
Just close your eyes right now
and give him your life.

[Ordinary Sarah]

Nice, I like.

[Rockin'forHim]

Very good.

[girlXwithXaXgun]

Originally Posted by farmgirl16

One plane destroys a tower
One soldier in battle falls
One man loved his son
One son died for us all.

One girl cries to sleep at night cause
One mother took her own life
One father can't look at his kids because
One look reminds him of his wife

One believer preaches the gospel
One more died for his beliefs
One man died on a cross cause
One thought he was a thief

One Bible opens everyday
One child decides to kneel and pray
One Father looks down from above
and gives his children everlasting love.

i like this one a lot lot lot.