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Jeff 04-24-2002 09:00 PM



froggee501 04-24-2002 09:11 PM

by Emma Catherine Tucker

waterfall of preteen girls clamoring after boy bands
starry eyed teenagers: "I'm your number one fan!"
Druggie with his smoke in hand: "get the **** away.
Don't come round here bothering me, less you'd like to pay."
little kidís got their blankie firmly in their grip
alcoholic grabs the bottle, takes another sip
abuser kicks the victim lying on the floor,
grampa wants to walk out of the house, past that wooden door.
many times a person may have an obsession,
Itís up to them, to themselves, to make a confession.

froggee501 04-24-2002 09:12 PM

word: spinning

Jeff 04-24-2002 09:19 PM

bottles spinning
on hardwood floors
nerve-sweat-watered preteens
eating party hors dervoirs
pick muh me!
commanding the bottle
for suzy lu's kiss
the eyes spin with rotating cap
of 3 deathmatched pairs

Jeff 04-24-2002 09:19 PM


froggee501 04-24-2002 09:26 PM

by Emma Catherine Tucker

Waking, back to the wooden floor
with the sleeping bag curled round you
Over your head, the expanse of the sky
with the sun breaking to the side anew

Shimmering colors in the sky, many hues
the wild surrounding the site
Sleepy yawns groaning from the girls
as morning arises from the night

The chill wind waking you suddenly,
the dew drops moisten your hair,
Yet ignorance greets these peeves,
As you breathe in that morning air.

The forest all around you and your friends
as youíve slumbered under the stars
Awaking to the gorgeous time
of the natureís morning, unmarred.

word: assurance

Jeff 04-25-2002 04:42 AM

restless assurance
speculation is mine
the sureness of confusion
sure to follow in its definitive unsureness
the realistic paradox
oxy- am I a moron?
oh reality! less real in my own mind . . .
my perceptions could be flawed
though unrelentingly
He forces
like a tyrant God
my mind breaks these
knees that bow not
and definition
presupposition forced
cannot take hold of what might be true
what might be true?
how vexed is human
my human comprehension
lone assurance
in troubled soul
that assurance will never

Jeff 04-25-2002 04:42 AM



Unregistered 04-25-2002 01:42 PM

there is meaning to this choas
order in the insane
reality in the unreal
comfort inside this pain
there is meaning to this riddle
light inside the cave
saftey in the battle
peace inside the grave

Unregistered 04-25-2002 01:43 PM

word - deception

froggee501 04-25-2002 03:45 PM

by Emma Catherine Tucker

The mask
Pulled down over the face of one to be
in a masquerade, or perhaps to flee
the world, being one you can not see.

The hood
Covering the head, shading the eyes,
Making it hard to see through the disguise,
To hide yourself so: is that wise?

The garb
Hiding the body from view, the costume
masking the person like paint or perfume,
Creating a new character for one to assume.

Found in many ways, so often physical,
To hide that which one might other wise recall,
To make the lie seen, and the truth seem small.

froggee501 04-25-2002 03:46 PM

word: rememberance

leahsplace 04-25-2002 04:13 PM

haven't tried one yet...but I'm using a new try it too:nine

It's nine
almost time
to step into your mind
to leap from the ground
at the first alarming sound
there is five left of nine...
soon it will be ten
then I will be out of here
soon I'll come again
the best thoughts come at nine
maybe tomorrow I can ryhme

okay so maybe it is corny


Jeff 04-25-2002 05:22 PM

I'm sorry. But that isnt how it works. If you want to be allowed to offer a word, give a meaning poem.

Jeff 04-25-2002 05:24 PM

rather, rememberance

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