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Jeff 05-20-2002 01:32 PM

Fatty portions
flow off the table
to those who have no
qualms about
The swine who eat their kindred
do so at troughs
well visited in
both frequency and
community and so
the fittest seem to
survive, when you are
livving with swine.

Jeff 05-20-2002 01:33 PM


Jared 05-20-2002 02:56 PM

Shattered skies of refractory clouds
Kaleidoscope unraveled
On a canopy of twisted radiance
Afterglow distorted by a glassy thunderhead
To thaw the road less traveled
Roads of Spartan abstinence

*10 points to the one who can write a poem to the word: Austere
*20 points to the one who can decode the poem I just wrote about glass!

littleperson113 05-21-2002 04:59 PM

Mouth smiles as eyes frown
takes a step back again
the austere look freezes me to the bone
never pleased and never happy
There is nothing I can do
even as I stretch
to meet the standard

Ahh, it's not great, but do I get the 10 points? :)

Next word: pusillanimous (great word!!) :D

Jared 05-22-2002 09:14 PM


Here's my feeble attempt:

Glass prisons and gravel floors
Are accomodations for the profane
Heated or chilled by
Seventeen degrees of timidity;
A temperature not for the strong of heart
Pusillanimously peruse Poseidon's manuscript
Find that you are
Like the arteries of the ocean
Running dry of seagull's blood

Jeff 05-23-2002 01:25 PM

word word word

Jared 05-23-2002 07:39 PM

Sorry- forgot.
Here's one: MICROSOFT

Jared 05-26-2002 06:55 PM

Have we stopped?
Where ya'll at? MICROSOFT, MICROSOFT!!!!!!!!!!

teb468 05-26-2002 08:34 PM

is it bill gates
that everyone hates?
making his money
like a bee eating honey.
making his rise to the top
will he ever stop?

teb468 05-26-2002 08:35 PM

bil gates , microsoft. close enough eh?

Jared 05-27-2002 12:27 PM

We need a word, pal.

froggee501 05-27-2002 02:18 PM

try the word "rash"

owie. :(

Unregistered 05-27-2002 02:34 PM

Re: word?

Originally posted by Jaredcamel66
We need a word, pal.

whoops, sorry, i was tired and went to bed

Jared 05-27-2002 09:41 PM

Ventrolateral atrophy
Incapable of moving a muscle
This rash has crystalized your strength
...into gravelly discomfort
A schism between pain and love
Separation from every color of life you crave
This blasted rash has you pinned


Jeff 05-28-2002 12:37 PM

A schism: architecturally placed
between your life's

You separate me
out, separate me from myself.

Please remove the blasted wall from
before my eyes;
take off the plaster mask.

Don't separate me
out, separate me from myself.

When I am near you,
your face is transparent,
and I see the center that you hide.

You love me don't you?

I try to rationalize
to your now plaster mind
with a plastered mind

because you drove me to it.

Don't separate me
out, separate me from myself.

Can I convince you of your
own foolishness? own

word: Justice

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