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Daniel
01-04-2002, 12:13 AM
Hey I just recorded this

To listein *PLEASE DO* http://pedro1984.tripod.com/music.htm

-Confusion-

v1
Wondering which way I should go
Seein all the paths I can take
Questions flying around my brain
All I need is the answers

Chorus
Where are the answers found at
I can t seem to grasp yet
Show me the way I need to go
Before confusion take my soul

v2
Mysteries around every corner
Solving them is such a pain
I've been lookin in all the wrong places
All I've found is empty space

Bridge
I dont know were I've been
Searchin so much within
(this isnt in the recording)

So what do ya think?
How bought some feedback please


Adios,
Daniel:D

eboats
01-05-2002, 02:08 AM
This song is way to light for me. Also I can't stand the sound of acustic guitar. When you were signing were you trying to slur the words as part of your style?

Daniel
01-05-2002, 08:11 PM
Sorry, Acoustic Guitar is all I got.....so I cant help you on that one
Not too sure about the slurying or whatever........cant really pick it out......but thanks anyway

Adios,
Daniel:D

drew
01-05-2002, 08:20 PM
the acoustic guitar is awesome! it sounds nice. a little more diction on the singing, good lyrics!

ChrisB88
01-07-2002, 05:29 PM
I agree with Drew. It's wonderful song, and your singing is quite well; but possibly more accentation on your words. I'm not too sure how experienced you are in your guitar playing, but maybe mix up some of the strumming a bit.

No critical remarks here, just triyng to help you out! Sounds great!


In Christ,
Chris

Pendulum_LV
01-08-2002, 11:31 AM
cool song, i like the strumming pattern, maybe vary it a little, but it has a nice folk rock feel. a little better pronunciation would be nice, but its a good song :)

Andrew Brim

ChrisPeeper
01-08-2002, 02:14 PM
I think the acoustic guitar sounds awesome for home recording...

Daniel
01-08-2002, 07:43 PM
Thanks yall for the suggestions

I'm not really known as a singer......but I'll work on my announcation (sp) and I'll change up the strummin patterns some....the bridge has a different pattern......and I can do some palm mutes on a verse or so...Thanks

Adios,
Daniel:D