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05-10-2001, 08:06 PM
Hey,
I love all the feedback this website gives!! I have written the lyrics to 2 songs. Unfortunatley i am a drummer so i cannot write music to them. If some1 could give me tips or just see if the lyrics are ok i would appreciate itVerse 1
Dead Man Walkin'
Oh There is a dead man walkin'
Walkin' down the street
He's showin' me what he's got
He's got holes on his hands and blood on his face
And a smile from ear to ear
Chorus
His name is JES-US
And he was crucified
And he took all the sins of the world when he died
But now here he is safe and alive
His name is JE-SUS and he was crucified
Verse 2
Now this guy's my hero because of what he did
He died for us so we all could live
He would do anything for anyone
And wouldn't mind at all
He wouldn't even think a second
God's wonderful only son
Chorus
Verse 3
His words were so holy and are still known today
He preached the best sermons
And spread God's message all over the place
This man was a living legend
And the greatest of all men
Chorus
Dead Man Walkin' is a ballad if that helps
Moses Takes a Stand
Verse 1
The Israelites were treated bad
Until Moses really started getting mad
He told the pharaoh to let his people go
But the pharaoh laughed and just said no
Chorus
Let my people go
Let my people go
We can't work or serve
Pharaoh you gotta'
let my people go
Verse 2
Now Moses was lucky cause God was on his side
And with God there is no place
the pharaoh could hide
God had a plan up his sleeve
He would send ten plagues
So the pharaoh
would let the people leave
Chorus
Verse 3
But these ten plagues weren't just any old things
After nine of these plagues
The pharaoh still refused
The tenth one to come was of course the worst
They killed every male of the Egyptians
But only the first
Chorus
Verse 4
After this real big loss
The pharaoh couldn't hold
Leave right now is what he told
But after they left the pharaoh thought
Oh my gosh I made a mistake
I need them hear for my countries sake
Chorus
Verse 5
So they chased the Israelites
right to the Red Sea
and it was the pharaohs last chance
to stop the mutiny
God gave Moses the strength he would need
So he could part the Red Sea and the Israelites could leave
Moses is a jazzy song
My Website (http://http://www.homestead.com/theapostlescreed/TheApostlesCreed.html)
I love all the feedback this website gives!! I have written the lyrics to 2 songs. Unfortunatley i am a drummer so i cannot write music to them. If some1 could give me tips or just see if the lyrics are ok i would appreciate itVerse 1
Dead Man Walkin'
Oh There is a dead man walkin'
Walkin' down the street
He's showin' me what he's got
He's got holes on his hands and blood on his face
And a smile from ear to ear
Chorus
His name is JES-US
And he was crucified
And he took all the sins of the world when he died
But now here he is safe and alive
His name is JE-SUS and he was crucified
Verse 2
Now this guy's my hero because of what he did
He died for us so we all could live
He would do anything for anyone
And wouldn't mind at all
He wouldn't even think a second
God's wonderful only son
Chorus
Verse 3
His words were so holy and are still known today
He preached the best sermons
And spread God's message all over the place
This man was a living legend
And the greatest of all men
Chorus
Dead Man Walkin' is a ballad if that helps
Moses Takes a Stand
Verse 1
The Israelites were treated bad
Until Moses really started getting mad
He told the pharaoh to let his people go
But the pharaoh laughed and just said no
Chorus
Let my people go
Let my people go
We can't work or serve
Pharaoh you gotta'
let my people go
Verse 2
Now Moses was lucky cause God was on his side
And with God there is no place
the pharaoh could hide
God had a plan up his sleeve
He would send ten plagues
So the pharaoh
would let the people leave
Chorus
Verse 3
But these ten plagues weren't just any old things
After nine of these plagues
The pharaoh still refused
The tenth one to come was of course the worst
They killed every male of the Egyptians
But only the first
Chorus
Verse 4
After this real big loss
The pharaoh couldn't hold
Leave right now is what he told
But after they left the pharaoh thought
Oh my gosh I made a mistake
I need them hear for my countries sake
Chorus
Verse 5
So they chased the Israelites
right to the Red Sea
and it was the pharaohs last chance
to stop the mutiny
God gave Moses the strength he would need
So he could part the Red Sea and the Israelites could leave
Moses is a jazzy song
My Website (http://http://www.homestead.com/theapostlescreed/TheApostlesCreed.html)