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stillgrowin'
02-06-2001, 03:32 PM
<font color=navy>I just call this poem wall because I can't think of a title for it. If you have any suggestion for a good title, please let me know. This poem was inspired by my mission trip to Guatemala. We had to replace an old wall with an earthquake-resistant wall. Maybe I will write about it in the sharing section.

The wall I once thought to be so secure,
Built on my hopes and dreams for the future,
Is tumbling down on the ground,
Its remains nowhere to be found.

The force of reality advances,
Past the earth my wall used to stand.
My hopes crushed by fear, my dreams blurred by tear,
I try to run, only to fall down.

I cannot run, so let me hide.
As I start to dig, what should I find:
Garbage, wastes, traces of corruption,
Where there should have been a foundation.

Broken, ashamed, I cry in humility,
Afraid of the fate of my eternity.
Have mercy, O God. Forsake me, do not.
Deliver me from this devastation.

“Take refuge under the shelter of my wings,
For my grace is greater than your sufferings.”
My soul rejoices in hearing your voice,
For I have found a firm foundation,
In the promise of your salvation.</font>

Amy
02-06-2001, 06:46 PM
I like it, Wes! I like it alot. And I actually think "Wall" is a good title for it, since that's what it was inspired by.

Mr Niceguy
02-07-2001, 06:57 AM
Awesome song!

kwikemartownr
02-07-2001, 07:48 PM
Powerful message Wes! I really enjoyed the line of digging and finding that your foundation is covered by extraneous things.

Again, sweet song!

ShyStrings
02-07-2001, 09:54 PM
WE have GOT to get that mp3 section going sometime soon!!! I cant wait to hear you all playing these great songs... Keep up the good work Wes and everybody else.

-shy-

stillgrowin'
02-07-2001, 09:58 PM
<font color=navy>I don't know why everyone thinks this is a song. I wrote it as a poem, and have been not successful in making a song out of it.</font>

ShyStrings
02-07-2001, 10:48 PM
Because this is a guitarist website, though the section is titled songs and poetry. Its a natural mistake. Sorry;)

-shy-

MrCrabby
02-08-2001, 12:53 PM
Wes, when did you go to Guatemala?
My youth group went there last summer.

stillgrowin'
02-08-2001, 01:21 PM
<font color=navy>We left on March 21, 2000 and stayed there for about 10 days.</font>

MrCrabby
02-08-2001, 01:24 PM
Oh, we went in the end of July, what parts did you visit?

stillgrowin'
02-08-2001, 01:30 PM
<font color=navy>We mostly stayed in Guatemala city. We stayed at a baptist seminary. On a saturday, we went shopping to Antigua.</font>

MercyMe
02-09-2001, 11:33 PM
This is great Wes!! When are we gonna get to see some more of this???